Wednesday 7 March 2018

Empathy

I heard people teasing him
I heard a scream like there was a zombie apocalypse.
I saw the tear dripping down from his face.
I felt sympathetic and worried.
I felt scared for that person.
I wonder why they were mean to him.

I wonder what will happen next.
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1 comment:

  1. Unknown1 August 2018 at 19:23

    I love the way you used lots of senses as well as a wondering. If you write this again, maybe include what you smelt (if you would smell anything).

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